Killing Me Softly

by Tricky Daze   Jan 23, 2007


How many of us LIVE as we want?
Without regret,IGNORANCE or their mistakes
Are they their FAULTS or just believe in fate
Nobody is happy EVEN they've anything they want

Pass my days crying IT helps me to live
The blackness of you SUCKS,i know it's real
xxxxxx
What people find GOOD,made a question
Dis philosophy goes ON,my secret pages
I got mumbled the OTHER woman that she's right
Yes,i look forward the Day,I'll end up my life
xxxxxx

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  • 18 years ago

    by amoxi

    The cap letter thing was creative i liked it keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Nobody is happy EVEN they've anything they want
    ^^ They've I think should be * if they have* it would make more sense.

    Other then that its a pretty good poem. It did get me thinking but really dont wanna say what I'm thinking. 5/5

    Happy Valentines Day!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is sooo goooddd!!!
    love the way you write... keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Well written and clever and thanks for the comments i an im a battle with deppresion so thanks for the uplifting comments.

    To you who,
    care I thank you big
    you saved me from this hole I dig
    to took the time
    to share a rhyme
    and now I see you through

  • 18 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    I like it kinda was confused but i liked it 4/5

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