by RJ
Very creative... Good job. |
by Pyro (Carys)
Thas extremely clever well done!! |
Yur creative . I`ve read some of your other poems . Yur a pretty visual person[: I like the poem, titled with a happy title, yet the poem is sad . |
by Rona
I thought this was excellent! I like the hidden message "Life is Good" Great job! I like the structure as well. |
I really enjoyed this poem, it was very dark and feeling although the x's sort of confused me. Anyways, keep up the excellent work! :) |
by Tricky Daze
For people who haven't understood this,everyone noticed life is good but haven't noticed live ignorance faults even it sucks and good on other day i did x's for you to eliminate this two sentences from each other...a warning if u liked it vote and comment,if you didn't please not,i'm angry to see downvotes,deal? |
by Kristina
Ehh, this wasnt as good as your other one. i really didnt understand it too much. but good job still |
by Michelle18
Great poem...i think the caps made the poem stand out and helped understand the meaning of the poem. |
by *Isolde*
Wow that was a great poem...had alot of meanings to it...keep it up. |
I like it kinda was confused but i liked it 4/5 |
Well written and clever and thanks for the comments i an im a battle with deppresion so thanks for the uplifting comments. |
by Robie Lincer
This is sooo goooddd!!! |
Nobody is happy EVEN they've anything they want |
by amoxi
The cap letter thing was creative i liked it keep it up |