Begining

by Finalgravedigger   Jan 23, 2007


Beginning

This is my beginning not my end this is where it starts but not the end this is where I begin to learn and start my adventure this is where the questions begin and life is still pure.But the beginning is also tough it shapes our future and our life.I wish I could never leave the beginning never getting into such a cruel world staying there pure.The future holds troubles that I never want to see.
So enjoy the beginning before you get hurt.

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  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    I understand you feel related to my poems, because i feel the same to yours...
    this is especially nice...
    5/5

    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by finallyinlove

    Wow your very talented! Keep it up.. Thanks for my comment

  • 17 years ago

    by Kei

    Would that be a threat or a wornging?
    (sorry i cant spell very good)
    i was joke i like lots oh hay i put thoughs two new ones up now!

  • 17 years ago

    by Maddeline

    As you have asked, I have read some of your stuff. Thanks for the comment on mine by the way. This is good, a lot of feeling but very metaphoric. What is it you are really trying to say; enjoy being young, or is there something more? Anyway, enjoyable non the less.

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    OOPS! I accidently submitted when I wasn't done talking.

    ...one big paragrah. I liked the whole concept of the poem. Thanks for all the comments you've left me!
    PV

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