Like it! You're talented. I'm not sure if it is your style of just the way you type, but it makes it kind of hard to read when it's typed as one big paragraph

OOPS! I accidently submitted when I wasn't done talking.

...one big paragrah. I liked the whole concept of the poem. Thanks for all the comments you've left me!
PV

As you have asked, I have read some of your stuff. Thanks for the comment on mine by the way. This is good, a lot of feeling but very metaphoric. What is it you are really trying to say; enjoy being young, or is there something more? Anyway, enjoyable non the less.

Would that be a threat or a wornging?
(sorry i cant spell very good)
i was joke i like lots oh hay i put thoughs two new ones up now!

Wow your very talented! Keep it up.. Thanks for my comment

I understand you feel related to my poems, because i feel the same to yours...
this is especially nice...
5/5

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