Efflorescence

by Melissa   Jan 23, 2007


Momma says I've got a poet's heartache
that I dally
among the gardens of malady
where briery thorns
nip at their own flimsy petals
and all the virile plants want to heal me,
but I'm saving myself
for some wild haired rose
who's only going to tear
my flowering heart........................apart

Daddy says I'm a rare bloom
with tender palms
and a golden stem,
in poetry I search for words
to bury my core within,
a tough little root
who beholds a mystical pen
that drips love for a man
she believes exists
somewhere between the lines
of her own making

But my loves,
I'm just a lonely pot
trying to fill blank space
with a poetic soil
so these veins will grow
into a substantial blossom
worth savoring
by thou gardeners
who give sun to thy soul
and a pause in time
worth reflecting
off the ground
of God's jaw dropping scenery

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lyn

    How can this poem only be rated as 4.8, it's brilliant!

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Wow. This is astounding. I loved it... you did a spectacular job. 5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Beautiful, introspective piece. I like the way you used the plant metaphors here.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sam Azam

    Beautiful imagery, flows amazingly. I don't really have any words to describe this poem except - full. In a good way. Full of emotion, imagery, talent. Very nice work 5/5

    - Sam