Beautiful. i love teh metaphor. and this is just written so well. nice job!

This is great! Love the imagery....5/5.
Debbie

IN MY EYES YOU ARE POETRY PERFECTION DEARIE.
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Wow Melissa! This was really good. I liked the imagery. You are really talented! Keep on writing!

Wow. That's one strong poem. I love your word use, the innocence of every line, the truth you put into this poem. It really is incredible. I just... don't quite know what to say.

Sorry for the short, helpless comment, but....

5/5
~Stephen White

Now THIS is an excellent poem. So many great lines, like

among the gardens of malady
where briery thorns
nip at their own flimsy petals

Well done indeed, my dear - FYI - briar-y

This is just overwhelming- so full of unusual yet powerful language and images. This whole piece is simply so deep, so emotional and really says so much. I love the title.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Beautiful imagery, flows amazingly. I don't really have any words to describe this poem except - full. In a good way. Full of emotion, imagery, talent. Very nice work 5/5

- Sam

I loved it:0

Beautiful, introspective piece. I like the way you used the plant metaphors here.

Wow. This is astounding. I loved it... you did a spectacular job. 5/5 :)

How can this poem only be rated as 4.8, it's brilliant!