Comments : Too Much Pressure

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Is she still moving? for good? im so sry...*huggs* hope all goes well GREAT POEM EXCELLENT JOB BUD

    later

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by ellewen

    Wow!!! deep. You got me. I think this is one of my favorites of yours. I can really relate to the whole pressure thing. I like the rhyme and rhythm, it goes together well. I kinda wanted it to go on. lol it jist ended. lol keep it up as I look for a sequal. ;)