I loved it. it was a very excellent poem!!!

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i love the way this flows and its ironic at the end... like taking you on a short sweet trip and then turning sour... anyways i like it a lot. 5/5 for sure :P
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I liked my first poem the best 2. Ive been reading through some of yours now and i think this is your best work! excelent