Good poem. The reader definately feels the emotion you want them to feel. I liked it greatly.

Wow...awsomers...the flow was good and it felt lik i was just pulled into the poem..very very kewlies..sounds violent at first lol but a 5/5 for me

I loved it. It was excellent. =) Keep up with the writing! I haven't written any stories in FOREVER, so I'm working on getting my inspiration back. =) Good luck with your writing in the future!

~~Teres (Spanish)

Hey don't worry about not writing for a while. the poem was great it flowed well but the best bit is it had meaning behind it! i really really liked it. you should keep it up! :-)

I liked it alot

Nice this was deep and i liked it keep writing this is a 5/5

love,
maidi

Yeah, I really feel the emotion. I loved it.

This one's also very good, and made me sad :( Very good poem

It is amazing mel it is deep and meaningful just remember if you ever need me call me or IM me im always here for you melly your a wonderful writer

Not bad.....but guys arn't worth it...trust me..I'd know becuase I am one....

OMG!!!!
It is so amazing and so good you are a great writer!!!! Keep up the good work forever

Its good = ] probably couldve had some things done to make it better but it is good

I respect the poem and it was awesome

cheers to you and

monks

Very deep and emotional, made me sad at points. The flow and structure was good. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

OMG...fruckin' chills all the way down my spine...VERY GOOD...I LOVED IT

Wow i realy liked that it was deep and meaning full great work and dosent mater that u aint writen in a while still good 5/5 ! !

That was really deep! woow! that was such a beautiful poem!
well done...check out some of mine see if ya like them..i havent been writing for long!
that poem was aesome!!