Good Poem!!!

How sad this poem is. You can feel your heart ache. Excellent job! Take Care Cindy

I can imagine your heat saddness. this is very gr8 work good luck

This poem is so good!!! keep on writing!!!!

<3, Leah

Thanks for the comment on my poem, just thought I'd return the favour.

I can relate to this one really well. I gave my heart, soul, everything I had to a girl once (recently actually) and then she ended up destroying it. What I mean is, that when we split up it was like something had been torn from my heart. I hadn't known exactly what it was back then but now I do, she had torn away my my ability to completely love someone. I only found that out when I started going out with someone else, I love her but I can't give her nearly as much love as I gave my ex or nearly as much love as she deserves, which makes me feel very quilty.

Thanks for reading mine :)

This is a nice poem. I hope, both, that it was and wasn't inspired by truth. Never nice to know someone's truly hurt.

Thanx hunn! your poem is wonderful. The only thing i'd suggest is to fix where the question marks are! and im sure it'll be an even bigger hit! =]]

Great pain and emotions is startws out as a whisper and grows into a great scream love it great work! the flow and rythem was great loved every word!

Although, this poem has some good parts, it lacks the essense that makes me feel along with you, as you tell your tale.

Try adding some details of the relationship or something of the sort; because, love poems, when vague, tend to be very... generic. I promise if you make this poem a bit more original, with some dialogue or characterization, it would be 10x better.

Very good, keep on writing!

~Richi~

Great poem. There are a lot of people in the world that can relate to this. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
*Brittney

It was a beautifully written piece. it was very powerful and had a lot of emotions behind it. it was a great poem to read. nice work 5/5

Ouch the ending was just heartbreaking... it hurts me to know that guys have so much control over our lives if our love is not returned, we feel so worthless. Well done *5/5*