School

I loved it! Especially the last stanza. And, the last two lines. Lol. I always love the ending of your poems. This poem got better with each stanza, just as most of your poetry does. The flow seemed a bit off in the first stanza, and the first stanza only. Other than that you did a great job.

Keep it up
<3 Teria.

''I'm said to be an ass
Yet I'm just misunderstood
If they got to know me
They'd realize I was good''

I adore that stanza.
I loved this, the first stanza was such a great opening, and the rest of the poem just got better and better.
This was frikken excellent!

"But instead they yell
Laugh at when I fall
Relish in their hatred
Despise my standing tall"

-I'll be honset with you; I was bullied at school. I don't know whether your story is true or not; but the comments I got everyday for almost two years were slowly breaking me. But I stood up tall, and as much as I was frightened to do so, it only helped boost my self esteem. Eventually, I was, you could say, the most popular kid in school because I put an end to their nonsense! :]

A well expressed piece, well done.

-Elysium.

This poem is probably one of my favorites of yours and what's more is that it is true. I see this happen all the time and its scary. People don't realize that what is on a person's outside is just a facade and I thought you really got that point across in the poem.
This was really well written and I loved this part the most:
"Save me please
From this hell of mine
Where the demons play
And the Devil dines. "

This was an awesome poem!
Astryd

Hey Awsome poem!!!! Wow the 2cd and last stanzas are really powerful!!!
Well done!
love Mel