OMG Nathan!! This is by far one of the BEST poems you've ever made! I seriously just read that over like..3 times! Omg this is my absaloute favourite one that you wrote!! This was my fav stanza:

With her eyes closed,
He got down on one knee,
"You can open your eyes now;
Will you marry me"

1,000/5 dude!!!

Lmao...umm...i think the person that gave me the idea had a much better version...i just...didnt wanna copy her exactly...but...i honestly didnt think it was that good..=)