You could work on the grammar a bit, like for example:
i = I
..ality. yellow = Yellow

etc.

Further on I liked the way you used the colors as an effect. Overall a different lovepoem but interesting. 5/5

-Kenneth G. @ Faceless Mirror.

I like it, but it's kinda confusing. i didn't really understand it. the meaning comes across as clear, but a mystery, withing reach, but too slippery to grasp, if you know what i mean. but other than that, i really liked it.