Nothing at all

by somehow broken   Jan 24, 2007


She's all alone again
wiping the tears from her eyes
Feeling empty inside
nobody's there to hear her cries

Still trying to forget
but fails every time she sees your face
You've walked away
and taken something she can't replace

Away you went
you left her to fall
Now all she feels
is nothing at all

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    "She's all alone again
    wiping the tears from her eyes
    Feeling empty inside
    nobody's there to hear her cries"

    ^Very beautiful, indeed. It struck a chord in my heart and I could tell that you wrote it from yours. The flow and diction was very nicely used. Beautifully written. Keep it up!

    Take Care and God Bless,
    Sarah :)

  • 17 years ago

    by luna bella

    This is great i know the feeling, not a very good feeling, you seem to know exactly what i'm feeling so......... anyway keep up the great work & plz feel free tocomment on my poems, thanx

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job!
    She's all alone again
    wiping the tears from her eyes
    Feeling empty inside
    nobody's there to hear her cries

    This says it all. I can feel this pain. Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Hey, this is a really awesome poem! Nicely done, its so hard to write short poems like this and get so much emotion in it like you have done. keep up the awesome work:D

  • Thats a bad feeling, ive felt that way before. hope everything is okay, great poem! deppressing but good, =]

    Diana
    xoxo

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