I know EXACTLY how you feel! My "friend" today slapped me because I litterally accitdently hit her but noooo she didn't take my sorry so she just slapped me and then tried to tell me sorry. But yeah. Nice poem I can totally relate. Check out my newest one, it's about broken friendship. |
Well some of the rhyming is a little forced, especially the "cow" part but hon I know exactly how you feel. I just recently lost one of my friends due to betrayal. This poem deserves 5/5 and sometimes damn u just have to let out how you feel. |
by Cindy
Wow! You really release some anger in this. Hope it made you feel better. Good job! |
Your poem was realy realy good!! Mabye you could come over to see mine sometime |
Wow.. you really let your emotions out in this one.. great poem.. the rhyme is great and the flow is spectacular.. i love this poem.. its real.. its great.. GREEEATT JOB!! |
by Shae
It's not crapy. And you did let your emotions out!! Wow...The thing is..I feel like that about someone right now! Great Poems!! Keep up the good work! 5/5 |
Well u did a great job... some words does not mix but it worksout fine well nobodys perfect i cant w8 4 more poetry to come |
Well u did a great job... some words does not mix but it worksout fine well nobodys perfect i cant w8 4 more poetry to come |
Omg SOmETIMeS THtS HOw I FeeL. :) |
by Never URs
This poems great... good job, |
by mingyuan
Yeah i met some people like this |
by Adriana
Lol cool poem so funny though lol...well comment back if you get a chance... |