That was amazing..yur realli talented
keep it up

Wow i tho=ink that this poem is really wonderful..it shows alot of emotions and thanx 4 the comment means alot

Very beautiful sad poem! I wanted to comment on your recent love poem but Im not able to get in that section, but anyways this poem is really good and btw thank you very much for your comment on my poem I really appreciated it.

I loved this!!
I thought this was beautifully written, and the imagery was breathtaking.
You did a wonderful job.

P.S In answer to the question about my poem He Takes My Breath Away, it isn't about anyone in particular, my cousin has a habit of throwing poem titles at me and then I write it lol

The words you use are so unique. they rhyme yet not many ppl use them. so perfect. clap clap!

dreams and seems. they match so well. well done! bravo!

5/5 David

Hey. Thanks for your comment. I love the reason you came to find poetry; I've always thought that the heartfelt ones with sketchy rhythm and rhyme are much better than the random ones with fantastic rhythm and rhyme. I hope to see alot more from you. It's hard for me to comment on love poems, because unfortunately I get signed out - but I have read some of yours and they are quite good. I enjoyed them. Thankyou!:)