You thought You knew.. (find the inner meaning)

by Your Best Mistake Your Perfect Failure   Jan 24, 2007


A storm never noted
(in my eyes)

souls broken and bloated
(left to die)

ones spirit tossed about
(no one to hear these cries)

No longer standing stout
(im letting it all bleed outside)

A lovers fire shall never cease
(you've grown as a part of me)

it lives not for he
(but for she)

this monster stands alone for her
(only if she'll once try to love he)

with all her flesh,bones;meat
(he'll never let go, clinging to the dream)

bodies compressed
(together)

create heat
(forever)

passion, love, entreat
(and ever)

If she leaves
(he'll die)

this heart never mended back
(he'll fly)

nothing left but a hole: black
(to find her)

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  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    THIS IS SO POWERFUL...this is one of my favorite poems by you so far, its so intense nad such beautiful imagery...keep it up....

    melissa

  • 17 years ago

    by kellie

    I like this one alot.
    Kind of understandable yet confusing in a way.
    But thats how i like it.
    =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted By You

    Its really deep, I love it

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Nice, I could sense your words and their meaning. Keep up the prose and remember to be one with your poem. If it is real you’ll be able to feel it breath and its heart to beat. A poem is a fragment of time, a sliver of emotion trapped in our hearts and set free upon the page. Where it can finally sore and fly with other poems or cry and weep with other broken hearts. Poetry is nothing more than emotion set in motion. Poetry is seldom more than the small fossil that waits within the stone begging for someone to chip it free, and then to wonder how it came to be.

    Keep up your good works. May your poems be a great frame for your emotion’s. May there be peace and love in your life. And may the mark you make upon those hearts around you be filled with joyous fragments of your own heart.

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