Living For Yesterday

This was so very sad, yet s beautifully written.
I'm sorry you are in so much pain, I hope ou ind ways o move forward soon.
The flow was perfect, the imagery fantastic.

Wow this is a great poem and thanx 4 the comment means alot

Shutting out this world
Closing my eyes again
You are here with me
Much easier to pretend

this is certainly an amazing stanza, complete poem is outstanding but u really shook me with this last one...this is really outstanding...u make me feel this way with every poem of urs.

u r simply the best.. ;o))

all the best and take care

Follow ur heart and most of the tym u ll get screwed
stamp it with ur feet and follow ur brain !!!
thats wut i learnt!

Its beautiful a real tearjerker im sorry if its about true events, you have a brilliant eloquent style to your poems xxx