by Chemically Corrupted Jan 24, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
I see shining eyes |
Wolves are my #1 favorite animal, so i realy loke this poem! |
by Oceansoul
Well written poem, a small story well told, jus the sentence "My eyes widen as I realize what happened" seem to me a bit long compared to the rest, so it stops the flow a bit , i think in my opinion that if that sentence would be a bit shorter and ended with a stressed syllable instead of an unstressed, it would make the poem a great deal better |