by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Jan 24, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
My ex-fiancee cheated on me. This is for her. Enjoy. |
by Tammie
This was really deep, and the wording you used in this truelly expressed how you felt. I'm sorry, again, that this happened to you. An amazing poem though. Keep your head high. 5/5 |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
The wording and passion were magnificent. keep up the work. |
Omg idk how i just entdered my comment i wasnt finished.. lol.. i dont think thats the way you use the word... idk it just sounds funny to me but im prolli wrong |
So the poem was AMAZING once again.. the flow was perfect as well as the rhymes.. however.. i dont understand it when you say you fiance wanted a child to share ecstacy.. ?? |
by Jenni Marie
This was so very sad, yet such a pleasure to read. |