This poem is so powerful!!! I mean...it really makes you think. I think everyone who reads it will start to think about what's really happening to the earth. Great job on such a serious issue....I especially loved these lines:
My palms start to sweat my heart starts to race,
As acid rain runs down my face,
VERY touching...keep it up! :)
>TimidOutburst

Wow! YOu really hu tthe nail on the head with this one. I loved it. Poems about nature always talk about the beauty of it, you reminded us what we are doing to kill off that beauty.