Gone

by Romancing the Darker Side   Jan 24, 2007


As it reaches,
crawling,
twisting,
all around her life,
her pride.
It hurts her.
Kills her.
She feels it.
Enjoys it.
A knowing that something,
anything,
might actually matter.
The red liquid life bleeds,
just for it.
Because of it.
Anything.
A call from her to it,
it replies, "No,"
she cannot be saved.
Another lost one,
another gone one.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Thanks! It was one of my first, so it's not that great.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    I liked this one as well. however the last to words should be switched. however, its up to you. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Thanks!

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Thank you!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Wow, this was just like BAM! i don't even know to explain it... i luv the whole thing, i can't evn pick out something to write about...
    great job!! 5/5

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