That was a really good poem...I was a little confused at the end, but the rest of it I could COMPLETELY relate to. And it really kept my attention! Just REALLY good,lol. Please keep writing and thanks for the enjoyable read. :)
~Midnight Sun

Ahh!!! man you are such a talented writer!!! i love the way you can make me feel about all these guys i know or love or anything like that just with the words you say!!! 5/5 keep it up!!

This was so beautiful and I know EXACTLY how you feel....great job! This sensation is almost overpowering. But you did great expressing that...and thanks for the sweet comment on my poem. That's always nice to hear :)! 5/5 for sure!
~Midnight Sun