Comments : Have You Ever {Sedoka}

  • 17 years ago

    by TimidOutburst

    Wow! That is really beautiful! I love poems that flow so well and feel so deep. You did a great job with this one! 5/5 for sure!
    >TimidOutburst

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Ooooo i really enjoyed this one...i havent read that any poems about nature.. i glad someone wrote something about it.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    It's unusual but good. Nice to see someone try some different forms of poetry. I love anything about rain, and the part of how it cries out what tomorrow left behind is unusual and neat! I enjoyed!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was beautiful.
    The imagery was breathtaking and it created prettyful pictures in my mind.
    I loved the ending to this, I thought it fitted perfectly.