Comments : A little present

  • 17 years ago

    by Erica Jovie©

    My o my this is sad. I am so so so sorry you have to deal with this. but God is going to see you through and carry you through the worst of storms. trust in Him and keep writing. you are extreamally talented! hopefully soon you will have something happy to write about. God bless and prayer be with you. ~erica jo.

  • 17 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    Wow that was great love always linda

  • 17 years ago

    by lost

    Wow that is an awesome poem. i like it SOO much. 5/5. i wish i could write like you!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Natasha

    Wow that is a great poem but really sad

  • 17 years ago

    by jamie lynn

    Wow this poem is deep keep wrighting 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    You are REALLY talented! WOW. AIDS? The last stanzas in all your poem make me want to cry!!! Is this real? Are all your poems real? WOW God, I hope not. 5/5 easy... just...wow. *tear*

  • 16 years ago

    by Joshua Reimer

    It was a sad poem but it was great and expresses feeling through its every word and i love how you explained the deeper meaning behind the cards 5/5