Is it

by Loved In Hell   Jan 24, 2007


I loved you and you loved me once
Our love was stronger than anything seen
But you stopped the love
I was no longer seen as a human being

I lost my light, lived only in darkness
My smile was a faded memory
People saw my pain
But no one dared to talk to me

The love I had for you
Is still very true
I sense every feeling you\'ve ever had
And right now I sense you are blue

I wonder does this hurt you
Like it does me
My pain is real is yours?
Cause what I feel makes me fall down and plea
For you to come and rescue me

But will you do it
Or turn away
Cause I will do anything
For you to stay

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  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved the emotion and depth you wrote with here. It was plain to see you truly loved this person and their leaving left you helpless.

    "My smile was a faded memory"
    ^beautiful line.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    It was great i loved it, very sweet

  • 17 years ago

    by Mel

    The emotion and feeling you put into the poem is great, but sometimes the rythm is a little off. good work though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautifully Nothing

    I really liked this, i could really relate, great job <3

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    This really touched my heart. How sad, your longing for the one you love can be felt in the words you write. Great Job!

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