This is such a cute poem! It basically shows that wishes do come true. Everyone should have people in their lives that can make them smile, and it seems like somebody has taken that job in your life. Great job. 5/5

BONNiiE.x

I fell the same way about someone but i dont know if i can tell her

thanks for the poem it is Excellent and has been rated

It was good, but more of a story then a poem. but it's cute, i liked it.

Wow, that's really pretty. Nicely done.

This poem is really sweet. I like it a lot. Keep up the great work!

Thanks for the comment on my poem =)

~Ashley