Lol. truee. friends are getting complicated. i LOVE it. ttly how i am feeling. 5//5 i am one for rhyming poems, but the ones that dont rhyme and get my attention means i think they're realy good. :D funny........i was reading your poem before you commented mine. Lol. [[tootles]] haha.

Aw. So deppressing... The structure was not... As it should be. The ABCB structure was no where to be found. its all over the place. Until I realized it was a Structure called "Free Writing of Emotions". Where you just write how you feel. I really saw your emotions. And i really felt your Sadness. It was not Excellent. But a good poem no doubt about it. voted 4/5