Nice write. the pain leaps out. live your life for you and forget others. thanks for sharing

This pours with emotion. I know it is so hard being a teenager. Keep your chin up and keep writing!!

I know what its like... :c
nice writing though!!!

yeah.. i am really from the Philippines... lol.. its kinda weird... we both got the same name... lmao! same spelling too... hahaha!

Awwh, this was written beautifully.
So very sad yet such a pleasure to read.
Excellent work.

Great work :] cant wait till your wrtie more
5/5
ps thz for the comment

I liked this one....very nice write.

The first line does not make sense, i think. the poem was very insightful, i have felt like this.

5 again from me. David

Again your poem is filled with many emotions great job!

Wow. . .This is so powerful. . .This subject holds a special place for me because it is SO true. . good job#

laura
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Wow. this is so strong and beautiful. great job. reread it to find little errors.

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It's funny how we sometimes think we know people by looking at them, by judging them on the way they look. The truth is we might not even know all there is to know about our best friends, it's easy to hide behind a smile. Excellent job and great flow once again 5/5