by Bridget Jan 25, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
An ocean of heat blasts over her, |
Another excellent poem the last stanza is indeed powerful your poem is very detailed and paints a picture that noone else could paint. |
by Crystal Gaze
Fantastic. Wow this poem was really strong.Like other I too think the end stanza was powerful. |
by Gem
"Never give up hope, even in the worst of times, |
Wow. great great great poem! loved the detailing so much! it really painted a picture. wow. 5/5 for sure. keep up the great work:) |
by Colby
REALLY GOOD. I like it alot.... 5/5 |