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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Great Poem Becky, keep up the good work and I hope you do well in the competition thing :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    Sometimes that nest is the safest place to be ,fly carefully my young friend! nice poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    Hey this is a really good poem...

  • 17 years ago

    by SADADDY

    Beware never stray to far from the family nest that you may forget that you are so loved, may your heart always be filled with peace and joy each and everyday. nicley done young lady.

    sadaddy

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    I nice poem indeed!
    very truthful, very pure.
    a lovely write, keep it up!