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by Black Rose Jan 25, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / about death
Can you hear it? Can you see it? Then how do you know Bang, Bang, Bang, under my chest pushing the Ribbons U don/t see it but I feel it as it moves pushing endlessly The ribbons It keeps me alive with its pounding its pulse Of the ribbons The life blood The ticker Bang, bang, bang ���� There is no feeling of a pulse No motion behind my chest The Deep red ribbons flow from behind my Brest I lay in a box now watching the people cry My ticker got broken, my ribbons Die B-b-b-b-e-e-e-p
by victoria
Very different.but i really like it. Very emotional and vivid. great job! talented. victoria(p.s. can you comment mine...i would really appricate it. thank you)
by David
Nice poem, I think it might be some of your best work yet :)