Aw Jen!
Thankyou for writing this, you've made a lot of feelings clearer with this piece and although i wouldn't wish what i'm feeling on anyone, it's reassuring to now i'm not the only one.
And i know you can understand how hard it is to keep smiling.
5/5
*Gem*

This is a poem that a lot of people will be able to relate to on different levels. I cant say how i releate to this but it was very hard to read this poem to the end, its a magificent write powerfull yet gentle, filled with lost a touch of hope and pain, i dont really know what to say, it is perfect. 5/5

Nice poem, it is very nice to comfort someone in the time of grief. Shows that you are a good friend. Keep it up.

Stay Playa,
SC

Well written poem. The sadness comes through to the reader. Good job!

I like the flow of this poem it is quite nice.