This is the poem about addiction
i have ever read. Its like you are right
beside on friday watching and reading
my mind, I can't believe how much
these words from a total stranger
are mind words, thoughts and weakness. How is that possible? I'll
read over and over. thanks cy

P.S. read my i am your disease
i hope you get something from
it.

How can anyone read this and not put a 5/5 on it

This poem is really really strong..
thought provoking
scary
hard hitting
well written
amazing
I loved it!
emz .x.

Not to put pressure on you but i
i want you to know this poem
is part of my recovery, i have the
desire to want to get clean and i ll
read until i memorize it. iam
so sick and tierd of almosts in my
life thats it im tierd of being tired

THIS will always be my favorite
if someone reads this and don't
give you a 5 then thier just
crazy or thier taste is in thier mouth
lol

This sounds like I feel alot. Calling my name, begging me to come back, staring at me . I love this poem. Good sh--!

Wow. cy told me to read this and i'm glad he did. fantastic work. personified addiction SO well. outstanding work! 5 for you!! -beav

I wish i could almost make it , I CAN'T even get almost, IT's there
now when im awake in my sleep
even deep into my dreams its
cocaine my life it seems. I CAN'T

I can\'t stop, and the self hate monster is eating me alive, anyway
this is what i do the day after cry
like a b**ch, everything that happens
to me is deserve, I JUST feel so bad
for my family, what did they do to
deserve this

Wow that is an amazing poem
and now i see what many people
i know feel like. comment my poem
" look what you've done " if you get a chance
wow this is simply amazing!
5/5

xx.chelsea.xx

This poem is amazingggg i knowwww exactlyyy howw you feel..... keep it up

5/5

NxF

This poem is very good. it has alot of strong emtion. keep up the good work

Powerfull stuff loved it!

Excellent poem that I can relate to so well. Thanks to God I am clean now but I remember the almosts and I was never strong enough to quit on my own. It took God's help. Definite 5/5

I have several poems about addiction you may like if you get time to read them. I would appreciate any feedback. Thanks

Wow this piece was just so strong and powerful. i felt the exact same way with my heroin addiction. its a painful battle that never really fills you, i love the repetition of "almost like" because that is so true, its almost there but you never quite reach where you want to be and with addiction the longer you continue to do it for the further it gets to being what you want it to be. well done on an amazing and powerful poem which really shows the unsatisfactory concept of addiction. 5/5

This piece is a complete thought process, and I love pieces like that. When you can feel the writer.
The line 'knowing addiction is stronger than hope' is perfect, it says it all. I couldn't say it better myself.
Addiction is a war that know very well. A war that I'm fighting, a war that I know I'm not alone in. And this piece is a reminder of that.
So thank you.
-Amanda

Thankyou Amanda. If you need more, I can surely offer.