I Lost You!

Then it would be me
Who's giving up on you
Cause breaking my heart
Is the last thing you want to do

this really seems to relate to me, i have had this happen to me recently..... well done.

5/5 david

"Your wish is my command
And I'm setting you free
The hardest part is knowing
I'll love you for eternity."

Excellent ending, it really got the emotion across of fact that love is forever despite the circumstances
Well done
5/5
*gem*

"You're probably quietly wishing
That I would just simply walk away
Then it would be me
Who's giving up on you"

K, seriously, these lines are completely true. Seriously, that's how it is with relationships that don't work out. This was a brilliant poem, you're a brilliant writer, you make me want to be brilliant, too. I loved this, hope things brighten up for you.

Such a bittersweet poem...

"Then it would be me
Who's giving up on you
Cause breaking my heart
Is the last thing you want to do"

Breaking up with someone is always horrible especially when you still want to stay friends.
You really showed this in this piece
5/5
*Gem*