Oooh. Lease!! This was fuh-ducking amazing!! I loved this. I dont even know what to say. This was perfect. Glenduh wants your talent. Kay? hehe. ILY!!!!

-` Glenduh.

This poem is absolutely amazing, I love how you really touched all the aspects of this persons demise in this poem. Only thing I have to say is I think at the end you meant "fate" not faith...or maybe not I'm not sure. Good job!!!

~jas~

Wow.
this again was awesome.
You have a way with words that leaves me captured.
don't stop writing, you have talent
love Tara-Kay
xxx

Tragedic, but good ending, love.
It tied everything together, keep up the amazing write. I love your skills!
The flow made everything seem so lyrical.
ily xxxx
5/5