Hii. really good like the way you worded everything had really good flow
Ainz

Awww....very sweet poem, nice flow and rhyme. I will do your five comments as I come across five new poems! Sorry I must do it that way, but in a way it's a compliment that I've read so much of your poetry!
Good job Twisted Heart!
Charisma*

The flow in this poem is just amazing Jeannie. The words just roll off my tongue as I read them aloud. I think it could be the next top of the charts song ... so you better keep a close eye out ...

A cupid came and dashed my heart
giving doubt its due
A midst the pieces of a soul
that died from loving you
Black roses sit upon the stone
of where my heart once lived
Now dead within the chambered thoughts
and so hard to forgive.
^^^
I the reader can feel the emotions set forth through your words in this part.

Wonderfully penned Jeannie!

Awesome word usage. nice write

What a beautiful poem. I loved this write! Excellent!

& hearts;

Tiare
nice poem u have there is there away u could inspire me well i loved ur poem

Its realy good........ so if u dont mind who or wat is ur inspiration on making poetries plzzz answer me..... and hey if u have time plzzz check me out ill be waiting

Hey this is so nice i really like it i gotta add you to my favorite if i already dont have you on there so yea read some of my stuff and add me to yours if you like them! Love always

Monica aka Mika

That deserved more than 5/5 it should get like 100/100 it was so good.

Great great poeming. Keep writing ur amazing poet.
take care

WiLd RoSe

Please comment on mine. Thanks

I can not pick a favorite stanza as the piece in it's entirety is a beautifully sad story. Excellent rhythm and rhyme. I enjoy reading your work and this is now one of my favorites! EXCELLENT JOB!!!

Aweee thats sucha cute and such a sweet poem! 5/5 keep up the great work! and comment back if you ever get a chance! ok! well anyways great poem...

I really enjoyed reading your poem. awesome job, i wish i could write like that.

Gosh Jeannie! I have goosebumps reading this piece. This is nothing short of a masterpiece - every word hits out with so much power, it's amazing!!

i'm always in awe of your talent and after reading this, I put you on a pedestal - outstanding!!!

love and luck
shobhana

The imagery in this...WOW!!! This was was so beautifully written and so sweet. I thought this flowed perfectly and I loved every part of it.

Hi, i'm so sory that i only start to comment now! this was a beatufull poem! very well written with excellent emotion! Nice.

Narc xxx

Wow.
this is so so well written its insane.
mad props my friend.
mad props.

Wow, i dig this one so much, really really well written, you have a lot of talent.

Oh, wow! I'm speechless. Very nice dramatic ending, wonderful flow throughout. The imagery created wonderful scenes in my head, magnificient job, once again!