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by Corruption   Jan 25, 2007


Your eyes the colour of nature
beautifully brown like the trees
your hair is dazzling
as the halo shines above your head

*if anyone has any ideas about what to name this poem could you plz tell me it, i cant think of a special enough name*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    I think you should expand it. It seems to me to be a mere portion of an even greater poem. Liked the attempt of comparing the lover's eyes and hair with nature. So, a fine attempt, nevertheless. :) It deserves a higher rating than 1, I believe. :(

    =) Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Alissa

    I really like this poem, it's awesome. Keep writing!!:D

    Alissa

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