Amen sister:)

Beautiful beautiful beautiful! i know exactly what you mean here. i think all of us as "christians" (which is considered a very loose term these days which really stinks) see how others act and it really does put us true christians down. great poem. great thought. great emotion.

Good poem, and it makes me think, for that i applaud you

Very nice, u could turn that into a awesome song!

I read your "heehee" post and thought "what on earth..." so thought I'd comment on a more erm normal poem lol.
This was very truthful and quite inspiring. It was short, but did the trick.

Thanks for reading my poem, and for the favs addition.