Fatal Memories

by BrixGoesxRawr   Jan 25, 2007


Blurry abstract visions clouding mind
A tragic story when combined
Innocence, youth, childhood all lost
At such a young age, she didn't know the cost

Bringing up events from long ago
So the truth, she can finally know
Remembering times she screamed for help
Him taking her, making her yelp

Finding out why her life's been a mess
One way or another, she'll make him confess
Everyone will soon know the truth
Of a little girl, who lost her youth

Brianna Carter
January 25, 2007.

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  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    This was so amazing. You're great. I love the way you wrote this.The imagery was clear and meaningful.I liked the rhyme scheme because it added great flow to the poem.I also like how it's short, but it tells of so much pain. great great great,
    nessa

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This was amazing. It was well put together. Very powerful choice of words and though it's very sad you wrote it beautifully.

    cella

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Woah. BriBri. This was so amazing. You're effin' great. I love the way you wrote this...you didn't use all this crazy stuff about it actually happening...you know what i'm trying to say? Lol. It just flowed so nicely. This was great...sad...but great. I love it!

    -` Glenduh.

  • 17 years ago

    by Faceless Mirror

    I liked the flow with the "aabb"-style. Nice rhyming as well, it didn't look forced. Use of words was good. Yeah, it was a good poem. :-)

    -Kenneth G. @ Faceless Mirror.

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