AWESOME POEM!!!!! i loved it, it was so good. i can really relate to what you are syaing keep up the really awesome work. shanik

Very unique and interesting poem. Imagery is great and you created superb, haunting atmosphere.
Well done! 5/5

This poem was good all the way but the end got to me....Because that's how people think you're some sick....Ok I'm letting it go..Great poem..truely...