Destroy me one last time

by Faceless Mirror   Jan 25, 2007


Cosmic chambers of glacier patterns.

The facts of life intercepts the spectrum of paleness. You have the power.

Few decisions occur. I agree. We\'re both stuck, but you\'ve moved on.

Hurricane, oh, hurricane, spin me;
send me 60,000 feet up high!

Goodbye.

© Kenneth Gjøse (Faceless Mirror)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This was very good. It makes totally sense. I liked it. This is absolutely a poem from the heart, well written. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Uhm its definitally different then anything i've ever read. but uhm the flow is a little awkward. i think that you should take a little time to edit this poem b/c it has the potential to be good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Woow.... i had forgotten how mich i truly enjoy your poetry. you are talented... i mean seeeriously talented. keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow that was really unique, i loved it, really a great poem, great flow, lots of power to it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I sense sacrasm a little bit in this. I like the style of it, it was different.
    I thought your choice of words worked well too.
    Thanks for the comment. The part about the flow (you know what I mean) that person says 9/10 of the poems she comments on have terrible flow, so i'm not phased by that lol. Thanks again.

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