Good poem...very sad though hope your ok

This poem is very short but to the point I enjoyed it. Thank u for your comments on my poems "River of Teardrops" and "Forever Stolen". Yes "Forever Stolen" is about my children.

Robin is right, short and simple but full of meaning.
And sure, you can show her the poem but please make sure my name is on it because i've had a lot of plagurism at the moment.
Glad you liked it =)
5/5 for this one!
*Gem*

This poem was so clever, i loved how each line followed on from the end of the last, good idea!! well done

Wow

amazing

you're very talented.

nats xx

So much emotion with such short phrases...also very powerful and had so much meaning behind it

Brooke<3

Short, yes
sweet, yes,
but it has some powerful thoughts behind it.
Thats what makes it great to the bit!
keep up the great work!

Wow, just the structure of the poem is interesting. and it's so strong for such a short poem. loved it. beautifully written. (: