by BeautifulxMess Jan 26, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
A sweet melody |
by Sarah
This is a beautiful little poem! very sweet 5/5 |
by DeathlyAmore
Good poem. I strongly believe you should rhyme better. These sounds like rhyming you make on the top of your head. Take your time. stick your head on the dictionary, find a thesaraus. and start looking for rhymes. good poem again though. but not excellent. |