Great job yet again!This poem blew me away! i really like these lines..

"Even the ugly
The sinister
And the bleak
Are brightened by fog"

I can tell where your comeing from. wow great job! keep it up! 5/5

Amen to this poem! i love san fran. i go there every weekend to go dancing and i feel the same way. whenever im there i see so many ppl who are different and it feels like my utopia as well. i loved the pauses in this poem after each line. it really gave this poem a surreal fealing like that place couldnt be real. great poem. 5/5