This is really nice, greatly written, i enjoyed reading it. keep up the great job.

I really liked this poem, it flowed very well. It was very well written too . keep it up 5/5

Good job! This sends a much needed message!

I think that this one was a stretch on your abilities as a writer. this one didnt flow like the other ones. it didnt feel like it came from your heart. in the third stanza the rhyme scheme was stretched cause u felt like you needed to rhyme so u chose ur words poorly in my opinion. I'll give this one a 4/5