Comments : 1000 Men

  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    Once again! Another amazing poem! I love the structure and the flow. Just one little mistake I saw:

    "would come with such a *coast* (cost)."

    That's in the third stanza. Overall, great job!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    This poem is excellent and its so relevant to all the things going on in the world right now. Awesome job, keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by shawn

    I liked it alot for some reason it seamed rather up-beat to ne while i wa reading it. Good work 5/5