Playing games with my heart

by Kaila   Jan 26, 2007


I shoudv'e known
from the very start
That in then end
You would break my heart

Not very wise
I did not see
All the pain
You would cause me

I thought I loved you
I thought you weren't like the rest
But I thought wrong
Out of all Congrats your the best

I wish you wouldn't
Have played with my heart
Because the feelings I had 4 you
Went way off the chart

But you dont care
Your to busy loving her
I wish from now on
You'd just become a blur

But you keep messing
with my mind
Saying I still love you
You are one of a kind

I guess I'll never know
If you really did care
But if you were wondering
My heart is left bare

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  • 17 years ago

    by w!th0utyou

    It seemed like everything flowed till the end it seems like the line "My heart is left bare" was kind of forced but other than that it was very good

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    "I thought I loved you
    I thought you weren't like the rest
    But I thought wrong
    Out of all Congrats your the best"

    I really liked this poem. It said things in a way some ppl have trouble addressing. The only problem is, I don't understand that stanza I pasted up there. I just don't get what you were trying to say.
    PV

  • 17 years ago

    by Mike G

    Not bad at all. I gave it a 4 overall but I really do think you have a lot of talent. I'm extremely excited about reading more things from you in the future. Take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I hate boys that think it's funny to mess with a girls most precious possesion. Her heart.
    And you portrayed that excellently.
    You got your point across in simple words that people can easily relate to.
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

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