Words of me

by Kaila   Jan 26, 2007


Pain
Is what I feel
Is who I am
Is how I deal

Hurt
Is me inside
Trying to hide
All this shame

Scared
Of what you'll say next
To prove your better
Then the rest

Lonely
Deep inside
Hiding all
My feeling inside

Depressed
deep down inside
wishing to hide myself
From the outside

Tormented
From the things you say
Day after day
I hate you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna

    This is such a wonderful piece, i can relate so much to this, keep it up dear, you have a powerful and wonderful talent!

    Jenna

  • 17 years ago

    by Perfection

    This is a very cool way of writing i must say, the rhyming and structure were good and there is a special feeling when reading it.. cant quite explain it.

    You have a talent so keep up =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Interesting, I liked how each verse was very short yet very powerful and managed to explain in a deeper way the beginning word. nice work

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    So much hurt in this poem, i wish you didn't feel like this, i wish no1 ever did. i have, and it is not good.

    5/5 great poem anyway.

    David

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I liked this poem! very nice job!