Comments : Joy is a concept to love or forget

  • 17 years ago

    by ToTormentedToEvenCare

    This sounds really good
    i really can imagine the scenarion
    its awesome i like it

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ......This works.....and is quite clear......

    (second to last line, I think you mean.. breath...;-)

    I so appreciated your profile...I plan to study your work here.....Peace.

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx TEARS OF A REJECT xX

    Dude this poem rock!!!!!!
    -Rhiannon